Jot winners announcement

11th September 2020

In March of this year, Island charity Independent Arts launched their first creative writing competition – Jot: A page of a work in progress. Through this competition which aimed to encourage anyone with a story in their head to express it, the charity hoped to broaden awareness that art can change lives and help combat social isolation.

Launching the competition, Independent Arts CEO, Lisa Gagliani MBE said,

“We hope this competition will encourage novices and experienced storytellers, young and old, to literally jot something down, or to record a few minutes of spoken word, to express themselves and connect.”

We are delighted to say that Jot received attention from budding authors of all ages and in response to all the entries received, Independent Arts' Programme Manager, Kerry Tindall said,

“The competition called for a page of a work in progress and it seems the entrants really made the most of the challenge with some great cliff hangers and suspense-filled endings!”

Our panel of judges, all with writing/academic backgrounds spoke highly of the quality of work, describing it as "witty" and "intelligent" and even going so far as to say, “I wish I could say I’d written it myself!” – high praise indeed!

The Jot judges were:

  • Edana Minghella, published author & Patron, Independent Arts
  • Wendy Varley, former journalist and Chair of Trustees, Independent Arts
  • Anmarie Bowler, Founder and Editor, Brevity, The Isle of Wight's Literary Handbill
  • Aline Turner, Former drama teacher, actor and director
  • Zoe Carr, Former Investors in People assessor, and business manager at Bright Ideas Trust, a charity that supports young people into enterprise

Following a judging panel discussion, we are very excited to announce the winners:


In the 5-11 category…

1st place – “The Friendless Jellyfish” by Anneke Henning

A very “neat” story about an unusual, small and pink jellyfish who lived in the Atlantic Ocean, who, due to her size, struggled to make friends. This story follows the adventures the jellyfish embarked upon on her quest to find friends. A “very deserving first-prize winner,” stated one of Jot’s judges.

2nd place – “The Printing Error” by Claudia Summers

A fantastic story about Stormie District Maternity Hospital, the birthplace of bugs and the place where they are declared as either leaders ‘Engaro’ or followers ‘Neerg’. With a brilliant plot-twist at the end, this story was described as “intriguing” by our judges, and they wanted to read on.

3rd place - “The Truth” by Lyra Ayachi

A very “warming” story about sisters Sydney and Zuri and their seemingly ordinary daily lives. That all changed one night when Zuri noticed their mum had gone outside in the middle of the night. Confused and intrigued, the sisters decided to follow her out the night after – what they witnessed left them in shock!


In the 12-17 category…

1st place – “Perfect Minds” by Mary Broadsmith

This fascinating story follows Mai’s journey on, arguably, one of the most important events of her life – passing the Choosing test in an attempt to become one of the ‘Chosen’. This “powerful opening page” left our judges intrigued about what would happen next!

2nd place – “The Fall of Everdale” by Katie Murray-Smith

Startled awake one night to the stench of sulphur, thick dark smoke and the sounds of bloodcurdling screams, this story follows Ira in her attempt to escape an unprecedented attack on her home. This entrancing chapter to what sounds like a gripping novel, filled with suspense and left us wanting more!

3rd place - “Stars Are Different in that Valley” by Emily Davies

A wonderfully written, fascinating and out-of-the-ordinary first chapter, following the main protagonist, Adelais’, unusual experiences at school one day. The high level of description allowed us to picture the scene! A highly commendable entry!


In the 18-100+ category…

1st place – “The Four Lords” by Toby Holmes

This “very original” and captivating story revolves around ‘The Four Lords’ hotel – “one of the hundreds Victorian style hotels you find in English seaside towns” and the experiences of one of the employees there on an average day of work. A “convincing, cleanly written story with good detail,” states one of our judges, with another adding that the descriptive element was so well-written that they could “instantly recognise the type of hotel” meant. A very strong entry and a deserving first place winner!

2nd place – “Available” by Sam Todd

An excellent poem, which has been deemed by the judges as “witty”, “clever” and “intelligent”. When asked what they thought about this poem, the judges had nothing but admiration for this wonderful piece and its author!

3rd place – “The Dust That Clings to Our Feet” by Hillard Morley

An unusual story, but one which gripped the judges and received a plethora of admiration! Its well-written dialogue “rings true” and left the judges wanting more!


The three first-place winners will each receive a selection of prizes, whilst runners-up will each receive a certificate. Unfortunately, due to the COVID-19 pandemic, we won’t be able to host an awards event.

Jot winners prizes

Winning and shortlisted entries can be read at

The Jot judges said,

“We would like to thank and congratulate every single one of those who entered Jot. It was difficult to choose just one winner within each category, so please don’t feel discouraged! We hope that everyone who entered pursues their writing ambitions further!"